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Re: Skill Translation [Not Done]
« Reply #15 on: January 07, 2015, 07:28:06 PM »
Those are mostly advices for shortening:

Line 12: "infight", how about "struggle", I'm not quite sure if it fits here, also the description kinda sounds unnatural, how about: "Increases the power at low HP" or "The Power increases at low HP" ?
Line 15: Does it fit in one line if you cut the "the"? --> Cuts foe's HP in half.
Line 16, 17: Leave the "pierces", it simply says it halfs the enemy's Def.
Line 19: Short "Can only be used" down to "Usable".
Line 21, 22: Short it to "1/3 (1/4) of the dealt damage recoils."
Line 24: Change to "Preemptive strike possible."
Line 25: Shortable to "Boosted if user has..."
Line 26: Paraphrase it to "Double power if allied puppet was defeated in prev. turn"

OK, this is how far I'll read. The translation is correct (until the point I have read), however often very costly expressed.
IDK, how much space we have, but I thought I could give few suggestions.
« Last Edit: January 07, 2015, 07:54:26 PM by Tyraxx »

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Re: Skill Translation [Not Done]
« Reply #16 on: January 12, 2015, 04:42:27 AM »
http://www.mediafire.com/download/tdq5jiuy1bt0jw1/SkillData.zip

Updated SkillData.csv and SkillData.sbs based off Kinsei's translation.
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Re: Skill Translation [Done now]
« Reply #17 on: January 22, 2015, 04:20:07 AM »
Uhm Excuse Me I Want To Ask How Did You Put This file

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Re: Skill Translation [Done now]
« Reply #18 on: April 08, 2015, 12:53:15 AM »
http://www.mediafire.com/download/1gap98fijh1zy8e/SkillData.sbs

Skill properties changed in 1.30 (Macroburst nerf, etc.), so SkillData.sbs was updated.
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