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: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: Ilikeswords January 01, 2015, 01:26:19 PM
Since this is where I am in the game, I translated this dialogue section (meeting Rinnosuke and him telling you to go talk to Alice).
I don't know if you guys want this in a specific format though, so I think I'll stop translating until someone says it looks fine.
Also, I am far from fluent in Japanese, so there are things I cannot translate. Luckily, this part didn't seem that hard.

The entire folder is included in the .rar, so extract contents to \dat\gn_dat3\script\talk wherever your TPDP folder is located.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/dc6d7efd24ifjc2/001-007%26021-025%26033-052.rar

EDIT: Added all my story translations to the file. Only includes 4 folders. Dialogue included is 2 Rinnosuke files, 1 Alice file, and 1 Meiling file. Formatting might not be consistent.

EDIT 2: Made some edits in terms of punctuation. I removed the Japanese punctuation and added spaces to stop some words from breaking between lines for files 034 and 035 only. Also, 052 has some Japanese I didn't translate. One is a sound effect for Meiling sleeping and wasn't sure what to do with it. Another I need context for. Not sure why SMD dialogue is right after the Alice and Rinnosuke dialogue since the Bamboo Forest is next. I can't check it since I haven't gotten there yet.

EDIT 3: Added Talk Scripts 001 through 007. I avoided 000 due to the amount of dialogue there and I don't know if it's necessary for the actual storyline.

EDIT 4: Edited more. Added more files. Fixed formatting. Haven't tested these dialogues yet (with the new formatting), so if anyone has issues then tell me. I skipped 020 due to not knowing the context. It's only one line, so someone else do it if you will. I don't know what it affects (which would give the context).

EDIT 5: Possible last update from me. Finished Medicine's dialogue, but won't be able to work on it tomorrow (unless very late tomorrow). I'll try to translate when I have time, but I won't know what else has been translated without people listing their progress.
: Re: Story Dialogue 033-052
: Ilikeswords January 01, 2015, 04:59:37 PM
The text seems to scroll down to the next line in the middle of words. Only way I can think of fixing this issue is by adding spaces. Don't know how everyone would prefer to handle this issue though. Here's an example of the translation in game:
http://youtu.be/Ce6ScJ_qMmY?t=9m11s
: Re: Story Dialogue 033-052
: Nutzer January 01, 2015, 11:16:48 PM
Well, from the first look, I say it looks great!

You are translating way better than me (What is not a difficult thing, but whatever)
Keep translating.

The only things that bother me are the ・・・'s and !'s.
Couldn't they just be normal one's?

...But I guess I'm not "you guys", so let's see what other people think.
: Re: Story Dialogue 033-052
: Ilikeswords January 02, 2015, 02:11:41 AM
Yeah, that was kind of annoying me, too.
I think I'll change all the punctuation to the English counterpart.

Also, I am not capable of translating everything on my own. I lack the knowledge. I need context in order to make a decent translation.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 033-052
: Tyraxx January 02, 2015, 09:18:54 PM
The punctuation must be the "usual" ones.
Since otherwise there might be problems displaying the text.
Also, western punctuation takes less space, which is also an advantage.

I need context in order to make a decent translation.
That's why I always translate while playing the game, basically like you're doing it^^.
But I'm not really in the mood playing TH-Puppet yet, even though I was so anticipated when I played the trial...
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 033-052
: Nutzer January 02, 2015, 10:26:53 PM
I don't know if it's enough context for you, but if it helps, I could write a "text-backlog" of the scripts while playing...

(Something like this->Docs Document (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GQpo-HXPJcKXIO_uDYtcclLemlV0kqlaC-tdJVkOsug/edit?usp=sharing))
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 033-052
: Ilikeswords January 03, 2015, 12:11:54 AM
I think playing the game while translating is helping, so I don't need a text-backlog, but thanks for the offer anyway.
To be honest, I don't know how much more I can translate since I have to go back to uni next week.
I want to try getting the files between 007 and 033 translated before then, though. May not have enough time, but I will do my best.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 033-052
: UnidentifiedPhantasm January 03, 2015, 12:26:44 AM
Also as soon as the first line the name of who's speaking instead of ? ? ? is a scribled mess of HHH or something. These as well as the gender select screen. On the second one, if you scroll to the right you will see Yukari says: After hearing this, what will you doH.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 033-052
: Ilikeswords January 03, 2015, 12:48:59 AM
That's strange...
Some of my files do have random letters in it, but it shows up fine in game when I go to check it out...
Are more people having this issue?
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 033-052
: UnidentifiedPhantasm January 03, 2015, 12:56:06 AM
Oh, by the way has the intro been translated?
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 033-052
: Ilikeswords January 03, 2015, 01:05:10 AM
I believe my translation begins with Yukari speaking to you in your sleep.
I've gotten up to the first battle with Marisa and am almost done with this scene.
Marisa speaks in a strange manner so it's been kind of difficult.
Some parts I wasn't sure how to translate or even what she was saying, but I did my best.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 033-052
: UnidentifiedPhantasm January 03, 2015, 01:19:00 AM
I found this in file 00104. I also found some erratic spaces in a few translated scripts.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 033-052
: Ilikeswords January 03, 2015, 01:27:36 AM
Yeah, I only realized today I could just press enter to reach the next line.
So I stopped the erratic spacing. So I'm trying to edit my previous files now.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: Kinsei January 03, 2015, 02:16:46 AM
I'm working on these as well at the moment, but there may be some item name inconsistencies, as I don't have access to the item list at the moment.

I probably won't be dumping my translations till I'm finished with them all, but don't worry, they will be finished! I have plenty of tine to work on these at work.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: DerxwnaKapsyla January 03, 2015, 02:23:39 AM
A friend of mine is also going to attempt working on the story files. I think at this point we should segment off who works on what so we don't have people wasting their efforts.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: Ilikeswords January 03, 2015, 02:32:46 AM
I won't be able to translate much more after Sunday, so I'll probably do one last update to my file then.
After that, don't expect too much from me. Also, as far as item names go, I wasn't really sure what to use, but I've been doing my best to use terms that are easily understood even if they aren't what the others decided on.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: Kinsei January 03, 2015, 02:35:54 AM
Meh. I know I originally put forth that suggestion myself, but then I realized I'm picky about my translations and could use the practice anyway, so I don't personally mind doubling up my own efforts. It's not like they take that long anyway. I've only been working off an on for a couple of hours and am up to about halfway through the first Sanae dialogue, so...
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: Ilikeswords January 03, 2015, 02:39:28 AM
Yeah, I've gotten through Medicine's dialogue.
The Human Village is next I presume, but if you're working on the first part of the game, then maybe I should work on something else.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: UnidentifiedPhantasm January 03, 2015, 06:03:45 AM
Could you make it so that when Yukari says: You´re feeling fine, now   she switches lines? Because the w is sort of obscured in the screen.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: Ilikeswords January 03, 2015, 02:50:19 PM
It should be fixed now. Thanks for telling me.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: UnidentifiedPhantasm January 03, 2015, 11:14:59 PM

Also when selecting a gender Yukari says giberish:
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: Elyk January 04, 2015, 12:23:23 AM

Also when selecting a gender Yukari says giberish:
That stuff has not been translated. You are seeing gibberish because you are not running the game in Japanese locale.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: UnidentifiedPhantasm January 04, 2015, 01:53:57 AM
Found some lines where words get cut out.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: Piemur1 January 04, 2015, 06:06:33 AM
Just wondering if anyone knows where the script would be at for the common quotations (like the healers' and shopkeepers' lines). Also discovered the perils associated with trying to copy the skilldata + itemdata + mapdata csv's from the older threads, since those were built for the demo. Lol. And I'm just at the human village, and I do not envy whoever is doing the translations for those, since there's quite a LOT of dialog just in that first town.zz
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: Kinsei January 04, 2015, 11:56:16 AM
Most of them are in 000, actually. The generic lines, I mean. So I've finished with them if you really must have them.

Oddly, I've gotten up to 074 without running into much in the way of minor character dialogue (like all the NPCs in the village). I'm just waiting for the moment when I open the folder that has all of them in it. Just looked because I was curious: all of the minor NPC dialogues are in the 500 folders. I.e. they'll be the last thing I get to.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: Gamer251 January 04, 2015, 12:41:27 PM
I could try translating the 500 folder using various translators, friends who can understand Japanese, and my own understanding.
Is that okay?

I'll send them here for proofreading.
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: Kinsei January 04, 2015, 12:58:53 PM
I mean, I'll get to them eventually (at this pace, it'll probably be the better part of next week, but that's it).

Probably better to spend your efforts on the .csv's, seeing as I have little interest in working on those myself. I will if it's the only thing left to do, but...
: Re: Story Dialogue 001-007 & 021-022 & 033-052
: DerxwnaKapsyla January 04, 2015, 07:54:40 PM
The 500 folder is already being taken care of by someone else.

EDIT: That being said, I highly suggest reading the Statement of Affairs (http://thpp.supersanctuary.net/forum/index.php?topic=387.0) thread before any party continues.